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Anne (I pledge £10) Brown
19/11/04 11:19
Thanks for that.

I had started writing something about my holidays in the Alps and got bogged down.

I'll use your tips and rewrite bits of it and add the important side box holiday facts and more importantly cut out a lot of stuff from what I previously wrote.
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david @ justride.co.uk
19/11/04 11:30
some great advice there.

I always find the problem is structuring the article, and trying to keep a flow goring from paragraph to para is difficult, i guess it comes with practice
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SloBoy "Two Dents" Fukawi
19/11/04 11:32
"What I dun on my holidays"

by SloBoy (CLass 2J)


on munday i got up and i plaid on the cumputer then i had my lunch and i plaid on the cumputer agaen then i was bored and watched telly and then my mum let me stay up late and then i watched more telly and this women got her norks out and then i went to bed and when i woke up it was all a dream

the end.
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Anne (I pledge £10) Brown
19/11/04 11:43
LOL slo don't forget to put the websites visited and tv programs watched in the side box.

;-)
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SloBoy "Two Dents" Fukawi
19/11/04 12:07
You're right.

And a photo of the norks would have helped to.

C- - must try harder.
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